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« Reply #15 on: December 05, 2008, 06:47:06 AM »

Im sorry, but it has to be said,

1. Jared wouldn't have a Jeep, he wouldn't be able to drive it, and unlikely that he'd find one.  (And it wasn't even explained)
2. He wouldn't acctually call them Zombies.
3. He wouldn't say 'man' in his sentances like a regular teenager.
4. You've changed his personality.
5. He wouldn't have seen the news report, not having a tv, being asleep, not caring.
6. He wouldn't be in a group, he prefers to be alone, and is very quiet.

like i said, im sorry, and i know i may sound like a Jerk, but it had to be said.
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« Reply #16 on: December 05, 2008, 07:01:50 AM »

OOC: Sorry but didn't know he couldn't drive or didn't have a tv, his personality but because i didn't have a huge amount of info i had to guess what he was like. Btw are we allowed to swear? Like the F word?

Nick spun around on his heels to see if Jared could help in anyway as he needed to get to Angela as soon as possible, but as he faced the Jeep he was no where to be seen. "Jared? . . . " there was no answer, "Fine, be a selfish bastard" he heard some footsteps running towards him, he drew his gun but was facing a man carrying a mop. . .
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« Reply #17 on: December 05, 2008, 07:05:59 AM »

Luke blinks, and then pokes the gun with his mop. "point that somewhere else" and then runs at the building hacking the zombies with his crowbar, looking detached and distant. "you coming, or staying out here zombie meat?" he said as he advances toward the hospital.
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« Reply #18 on: December 05, 2008, 07:07:39 AM »

(How the hell did Jared get a Jeep?)

''...To be honest, we may have to leave the introductions till we're in a safer area, I hear another group of 'em coming. Now, should we stay and dispose of them, or should we just keep moving...?''


Easy. He wandered into the streets, saw the chaos around him and decided it was not safe on foot, so he finds an abandoned Jeep and voila! One good thing about mass chaos is that you may use whatever is available without consequences <333

Oh and Im sorry, I didnt have a clear idea of your charas personality. And the story was moving ahead so quickly that I was afraid you and Chris were going to stay behind so I tried to include you. Dont worry I´ll leave your chara alone. I should have asked permission to use him first so forgive me ^^;;;

Btw.. ummm I also have to say this even if i apologized. There were way too many complaints for a two line appeareance ... srsly. And you didnt call them zombies either... so idk where you got that from. So well... still forgive me ^^;

In other news, Idk about the cussing part, It dosent bother me at all but I wonder if the mods would mind or not??? so idk xD
K , i´ll continue writing my next part laturzz <3. *Is at school right now* o _O;
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« Reply #19 on: December 05, 2008, 07:44:28 AM »

Anna ducked into the Director of Medicine's office, and began searching. !!! Golf clubs!! She armed herself, a feral grin on her face as she smashed her way to Angela with a nine-iron.
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« Reply #20 on: December 05, 2008, 07:47:59 AM »

OOC: Like i said, i apologise.

Well, they aren't my concern at this time. Knowing my luck, I'll probably run into them later... Jared thought as he swiftly got away into the opposite direction of the group. Im sure I heard a group of those things coming from this way... Jared whistled to himself as he walked down the wasteland which used to be the streets of New york. The whistle of course attracted a hoard of charging and screaming horrible creatures his way, Jared was acctually hoping on this, as he was causing a distraction for the group to make a getaway just in time. He remained emotionless, and stood still as he quickly had drawn his two swords.

'...Bring it...'

Right, i have only one chance to pull this off...if i don't time this right, im done for. As the hoard came closer, they had  started to surrounded him, and so Jared, finnally as they attempted to grab him, he shoved one of his beautiful, yet tainted swords into the guts of one of the creatures, forcing it to bend down, as it did that, Jared leaped off it's back and used his other sword to remove it's head.  He was almost crowd surfing on the monster's heads, yet he was on his feet, and running and jumping across the large group, slicing a head every now and then. By the time he made it back onto the pavement, he had only managed to kill at least a quater of them,...right, time for plan b. Jared then let of an extremely loud scream and charged at the creatures who were also charging at him. He ran through them, spinning his blades, cutting of limbs with blood spurting out into the sky tainting his clothes and bare skin, he had managed to destroy many of them, until one point when one of them had caught him off guard, and started to bite his arm.

'ARRRGGHH! GET OFF OF ME!!' He had only just managed to over power the creature and sliced it's head off, covering his face in blood. He then looked at the remaining creatures, and noticed  that there was only one left, with two incapacitated ones crawling across the floor. With one quick move, he quickly turned, and stabbed the creature in the head with one of his blades, while using the other one to swipe at the heads of the two on the floor. He just stood in the middle of the pavement, breathing heavily, his two swords drawn at his sides, surrounded by blood and corpses, covered in blood. He silently stared down at his wounded arm and thought, ...Okay,now im kinda wishing that i'll catch up with that group again, this wound needs looking at, it's pretty bad...Though i do kinda hope that they got away.


OOC:  (Shiczo said that Jared called them Zombies acctually. And also, you can tell alot by reading, that he was pretty much a loner, homeless, poor. So really, don't get all weird with me Lavey, im already annoyed 'cause of the haunted mansion rp thing, and me and Chris didn't exactly have to come into the story at this exact point. I don't wanna argue, and i don't mind people using my character, to be honest, i should of described him a bit more, which is my own fault.)
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« Reply #21 on: December 05, 2008, 11:07:50 AM »

Name: The master has not decided... puppet is his name
Age:the master does not care. He looks 9 though.
**Weapon will be aquired**
Weapon already possessed: (if your chara has any type of weapon before finding any in the rpg): sharp knife (a special kind of strong glass to get through metal detectors)
Profession: (100% living Human) puppet
Background: The master does not care. Master has taken over his mind and has fed off his life energy. The master eats through him, sleeps through him, lives through him.
Location when the virus broke: Doing the master's shopping at a local grocery store

(remotely controls puppet's body)
Name: Master, sage, enlightened one (or so he says)
Age: 52 (for 40 years)
Background: Human pupiteer. he knew the virus was coming out. he had his suspicions so he he shut himself off from the world with a stolen library book. i was some sort of magic. He put glyphs on a 9 year old boy that merged there minds. Thats what they were supposed to do. He coded the Glyphs just right to permanently bind his mind to the boy. He did this so the virus would not effect him. The day he activated the glyphs that little boy's froze. It never awakened again. The glyphs washed off of the boy and the master closed himself out of the world. There is no way the master can get out of his windowless doorless room now. he is safe.
Location when the virus broke: in the safe room a day before it was finished.
personality: he's a freaking creep.
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The little boy stared at jared. "hi. we are jim. i like that name. i will be jim now. i am jim and master. what is your name?" puppet turned his head to the side. major creapiness was radiating from this kid
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« Reply #22 on: December 05, 2008, 02:10:19 PM »

"Heeelpp!", Angela was about to fall when, in a flash a tentacle shot out from the window she had gone out from and wrapped itself around her. She gasped as it led her into the building again. "No let go off me!", she cried, trying in vain to free herself. The monster got her in again, tentacle rose her face up close to the thingŽs.

It was a humanoid being, clearly different from the rest of the crazed peoples. It looked like a man with the skin of his head shredded off, from his mouth she could see some fangs poking out, and instead of arms, two long tentacles dangled from his shoulders.

The singer had seen too much, she fainted just as the creature opened its mouth and moved her closer.

"Get your dirty tentacles off her!", two gun shots were heard. "EAARGHHH!!", the being cried out. Quickly letting go of the unconscious teenager who now lay sprawled on the floor. It faced his attacker. Marbelle stood before him, her magnum readied. "Dissapear demon!". She shot two bullets in its head, making him growl in pain and escape through the window.

 
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« Reply #23 on: December 05, 2008, 03:59:36 PM »

Anna burst into the room, panting, holding a bloodstained golf club. "Huh.....I arrived a little too late..."
Sam popped in behind her. "Better late than...ne....vee...r..." He trailed off as, for the first time since they'd met, he got a good look at Marbelle. ". . ."
"Saaam...snap out of it...."
Anna waved a hand in front of Sam's face.
"He fancies older women." She said, casually, as she hit him lightly in the back of the head with her golf club.
"!! Ow!"
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« Reply #24 on: December 07, 2008, 01:54:18 AM »

Nick wasn't too far behind, he tried to stop all three from making a mad dash inside but they didn't listen (Thats the problem with kids these days, too exciteable). As he approached the 2nd floor and peeked through the door he heard some loud gunshots, they sounded like Magnum rounds, so he drew his gun and advanced through the corridor to find where they had come from. Another two rang out through the empty hospital, echoing all the way down the corridor. Nick flinched a little but continued around the corner. He then saw Sam, Anna and Luke backing away from the female toilet and heard the smash of a window. "No! Not Angela!"

He sprinted towards the bathroom and pushed past the younger ones, he knew first aid so was able to use that if necessary.

"Is anyone hurt?!" he shouted as he barged into the toilet. No one answered and he could see why, Angela was lying on the floor unconcious with a woman kneeling next to her. She had long gorgeous white hair, and an incredible figure (This is no time to be thinking about sex!). He walked over to the two girls checking to make sure they were okay and if there was anything he could do to help.

"Hi i'm Nick, i'm a sargeant with the NYPD. Is Angela okay?"

"She's just fainted, probably due to the shock and stress.......I'm Marbelle"
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« Reply #25 on: December 07, 2008, 07:01:14 AM »

Jared looked down, at the very strange and quite creepy kid, he felt some serious weird vibes from 'Jim'.
'Hey there little guy...Im Jared...What you doing out here? Where's your mummy?'
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« Reply #26 on: December 07, 2008, 09:40:26 AM »

Luke climbed the stairs more slowly than Nick, watching the landings for more of the zombies. The crowbar felt heavier in his hand, and he felt tired as some of the adrenalin rush began to fade. when he reached the bathroom, and leaned against the door when he reached there, listening and waiting.
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« Reply #27 on: December 07, 2008, 04:25:32 PM »

"Dont worry Miss, IŽll protect you and the young lady". Marbelle nodded, "Thank you so much sir". Nick then walked over to the unconscious girl and lifted her over his shoulder. "Lets get going then, we need to get you to the police department, where you will be safer for sure".

Marbelle sighed, as she followed the officer and the two youngsters out of the bathroom. She couldnt stop worrying about the singer... Was it because of her bad temper or the fact that she had no ability to make friends? In the situation they were, if she was to die, Angela would be left alone.

With these thoughts invading her mind, she moved forward, barely listening to what the people in front were talking about. "Marbelle!". The woman felt a hard push that sent her flying to the other side of the room, however she turned quickly and landed on her feet, the weapon ready in her hand. "What the hell is this thing!", Nick cried, still holding his fire. The humanoid mutated monster that the manager had injured earlier had returned, it now stood between Nick and Marbelle. Anna was also with Nick and Sam with Marbelle. The boy bravely moved in front of Marbelle, "IŽll break your head in half!", he muttered.

"Eyaaah! Graagh!", the thing roared and began swaying to the sides.   
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« Reply #28 on: December 07, 2008, 04:48:15 PM »

Sam held his sword steady. For all his acting, his heart was pounding, his pupils were dilated with fear.
I have to kill this thing...but how?
It lashed out with the tentacles. He cut at them, but one ended up wrapping around his waist. "!!!"
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« Reply #29 on: December 08, 2008, 03:02:23 AM »

As the tenticle wrapped itself tight around Sam's waist i pulled him forcefully from his feet, Sam lost balance, dropped his sword and fell back onto the floor hitting his head on the doorframe as he fell. He fell limp as the beast started reeling him in closer to his sharp teeth. Nick quickly dashed for the door way and threw himself to the floor in an almost football (soccer) tackle, he reached Sam quickly and grabbed hold of his wrist with one hand. The other quickly went for his handcuffs and he attached Sam to himself, both Sam and Nick were now attached by the wrist, this made the disgusting beast struggle a bit, but it had immense power.

"Quick! Cut the tentacle!" Nick screamed while he was being dragged along the floor trying to grasp anything he could reach!
Luke sprinted past and grabbed the sword from the floor, now although he had never used a sword before he did have experience with mops! He ran over to the beast and with all his might slashed down at the tentacle wrapped around Sam.

"Aiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeee rrrrrrrrggghhh!!" A high pitched squel sounded out through the whole hospital as the beast shrieked in pain, Angela put her hands to her ears as it was deafening. Purple blood spewed from both ends of the now severed tentacle as the beast retreated howling as it went.

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"We do not have a mother, we are as one"
replied the child grinning at Jared.
"Okay well what do you want?" getting severly creeped out.
"To avoid contamination to master, among other things" Jim giggled and ran around Jareds legs.
"More are coming, hehehehee, More are coming to play!"....
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