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« Reply #315 on: February 23, 2009, 05:08:40 PM » |
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« Reply #316 on: February 24, 2009, 01:46:54 AM » |
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Chow sketch:  Creature:  Forest Mage Hafling guy: 
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« Reply #317 on: February 24, 2009, 05:55:53 AM » |
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Dude your handwriting is worse than mine!  That's really saying something. Good job on the sketches, I really love all your work. The speed paint of the boat really reminds me of one either you or ravenseye did a while back also involving a boat. I think that was you...  oh well.
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« Reply #318 on: February 24, 2009, 06:03:56 AM » |
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lol! yeah all the teachers say i have a hand writing like a doctor ;P which is the closest im ever going to be to a PHD  here's a new chow sketch. also this song inspired me so damn much!!! :O http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U1PdFpzQtQ8
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« Reply #319 on: February 25, 2009, 01:50:10 AM » |
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Sketches. The Last Touch!  Buglord  some weird mage. 
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« Reply #320 on: February 25, 2009, 05:40:07 AM » |
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here's the chow wip. 
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« Reply #321 on: February 25, 2009, 07:12:15 AM » |
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very nice material feeling on that last one , keep it up!
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« Reply #322 on: February 25, 2009, 07:49:53 AM » |
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Appart from some funky porportions I really like that last one!
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« Reply #323 on: February 25, 2009, 08:46:21 AM » |
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« Reply #324 on: February 25, 2009, 10:02:19 AM » |
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This one is brilliant! really good work! -I like the pose! -I love that you've played around with the proportions and caricatured it more than you usally do. The anatomy is still belivable eventhough you pushed it. -The face is awesome! love the expression. I also like the angle you have on it, like were seeing it from below. some of your previous faces tends to be straight without "perspective" and apears to be flat as well as not feeling 100% conected to the body. But this one here is all good! It's bloody perfect -great rendering! Not much crits, but one thing that I think you might want to tweek is the weapon and screen left arm. it seems to parallel to the camera view, lacking proper foreshortening just a quick example (maybe you could use the colour values on those things as well to strenghten the foreshortening even more)  Edit: maybe some more saturated colours near the weaponlightsource? added some red on top of the tigh area in an overlay-layer as one example 
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« Reply #325 on: February 25, 2009, 03:21:05 PM » |
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I realize this probably doesnt mean much. Beacuse im thinking more that this should be done if you didnt have the explanation right at the bottom. First of all when i look at this i dont even think sith. Its only beacuse of all of the art ive seen now of characters that various weapons that glow dont necisarily mean this is something related to star wars. So with that i want to suggest maybe a sith logo on her tights or maybe a very large one at like 20 ... maybe even less opacity that shes standing in front off that kinda shows that too. If i were to have commented before this and had seen it earlier i would have recomended you making her doing some kind of force twirl or something with more of a routy im a bad ass look. Looks excelent hope the best.
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« Reply #326 on: February 25, 2009, 08:23:24 PM » |
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Perhaps some red tattoos on her face and arms? 
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« Reply #327 on: February 25, 2009, 08:45:02 PM » |
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« Reply #328 on: February 26, 2009, 09:33:41 AM » |
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I'm really digging your stuff, Espen. Nice work. Really nice. Always a pleasure to browse this thread, man! 
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« Reply #329 on: February 27, 2009, 02:30:57 AM » |
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