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« on: January 04, 2009, 08:31:29 AM »
I'm relatively new to Flash, and I had a whole bunch of difficulties learning experiences putting this together.

C&C is extremely welcome:

http://tw.youtube.com/watch?v=6kA_IMYdfmk&feature=channel_page

It seems rather flat in comparison to some of the stuff I've seen on here. There are tons of gradient and lighting effects I've seen that I'd like to learn how to apply. Perhaps given some time...

Thanks for yours!
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« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2009, 09:41:57 PM »
Great work, this looks really good. Animation is great, you got some pretty tricky movement animations down nicely. Good luck on future projects  Smiley
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« Reply #2 on: April 24, 2009, 08:02:47 AM »
I think it is good. The only thing that bothered me was when the background turned completely white.
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« Reply #3 on: April 24, 2009, 04:41:10 PM »
Really nice, I agree with JT about the white background.
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« Reply #4 on: May 12, 2009, 11:41:48 AM »
I agree about the white background and the Rapunzel's walk cycle looks a little off when you see just her legs.  they should swing back when first leaving the ground and only MOSTLY extend when they move forward.
This is a little stylized and extreme but illustrates what I mean.
But overall, I believe with a little more work, it would be great
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